Wednesday Writing Tip: Finish Your First Draft

If you’re a writer first starting out, writing tips can be overwhelming. So many writers overthink the writing tips all over the internet.

I was fortunate to write my first few novels without the overwhelming “help” of the internet. I was fortunate to be able to find my own way of writing and creating.

I’m not saying writing advice on the internet doesn’t have its place, I’m sure it does, but not in the first draft. The first draft is for the writer to tell themselves the story. That story, that voice becomes muddled in between the “you should do blah” and “you shouldn’t do blah.” It can be overwhelming while working on a first draft

The first writing tip I have for anyone, brand new or experienced is Finish Your First Draft without writing advice.

Finish your first draft however you want to finish it. Finish your first draft and let the story tell you how it goes. Finish your first draft and find the way without anyone telling you how or why you should do it. Finish your first draft and then let the internet in when it’s time for subsequent drafts.

Happy Writing!

 

Wednesday Works: On Writing

I didn’t write yesterday. I could not find one iota of a pocket of time to put words down on the page. I did not shout into the void, nor build up a world where the reader can escape from our chaotic world.

I did not write yesterday. I did not throw words onto the page to see what sticks. I did not bend and twist the English language to tell a tale I can be proud of.

I did not write yesterday, so I did my best to make sure I wrote today.

Wednesday Works: The April Girls

The April girls are all there in Heaven,

Sitting in a cafe drinking tea.

Or maybe they’re all raising hell,

In some dingy bar.

Maybe they’re up there,

Chasing lives they wish they had lived,

Making up for the time they lost.

Maybe they’re watching over me and C,

Making bets,

Passing along the binoculars,

Always saying:

“I told you so”.

Wednesday Works: To all the Angels

Last Saturday, it was Hazel’s time to go. After 14 years, she succumbed to Feline Mediastinal Lymphoma.

Dear Angels who gained a cat in Heaven,

Her name is Hazel and she’s the best cat you’ll ever have. She responds to many nicknames (Beavis, Floofy, and Woofy), but I’m sure you’ll make some of your own. You’ll know if she likes you because she’ll sit on your lap the first night she’s there. If she’s comfortable enough, she’ll sleep there all night.

A few tips in caring for Hazel:

She really likes peanut butter, frozen eggo waffles, tuna and apples. Whenever you eat an apple, let her lick the core. She likes corn too, but please be careful to not let her get her head stuck in the can. Please watch your plate of food, whatever you’re eating, she will beg for it. She’s grown wise and knows how to off balance paper plates, especially with her chin. Don’t let her fool you, she’ll pretend she’s hungry all the time, but is well fed.

She’s a vocal cat, so please even if it makes you feel completely stupid, meow and chirp back at her. She really gets a kick out of it. If she’s stubborn to come sit with you at first, just ask her “Oh Hazel, Do you want that?” Most of the time she won’t want it, but she’ll come running and check it out anyway, no matter what you do or don’t have in your hands.

When she does sit with you, please rub her ears and her butt. She loves that, especially when you ask her “Do you want to do the ears?” She loves the kitty comb and stretching out, so please make sure you brush her. After she gives herself a bath, you have to tell her “Oh, Hazel! You look pretty today!”. It makes her feel good about herself.

Whatever you’re doing, she’ll be interested in. She’ll look over your shoulder as you do work, and make sure you take breaks to pet her and feed her. She’s a good companion like that, even if she thinks the desk chair, the desk, and anything you’re working on is in fact, hers.

At night, she can tend to be a little picky, so you have to ask her if she wants to get on top of the blankies or under the blankies. She’ll make up her mind, then probably change it again, but she’s a great sleeping companion. She’ll cuddle you all day if you let her.

She does have a naughty streak too. She’s an indoor cat, curious as they come, especially near the front door, so be careful when you leave. If she spends too much time near the front door, or gets into anything naughty give her a “Oh! Do I have to hold you like a little baby kitty?” Then, cradle her like a baby, even though it isn’t her favorite thing. Eventually, you might be able to get her to sit with you like that, but it will take some time.

She likes toys she can hunt and kick with her rabbit feet. Usually stuffed plushes work best, and if you throw a “toy-toy” (usually a granola bar wrapper, wrapped tight and tied in a knot) for her enough times, she’ll play fetch with you, just be mindful of the teeth and claws.

When you shower and get ready for the day, let her in the bathroom to “Get the water”, she loves to lick water straight from the spout. She’s good at cleaning herself, usually taking long baths in between long naps. She’s beautiful with a thick coat. She used to have a “13” in the lines of her fur on her side, but I’m afraid that got shaved off when she had the “overnight stay from hell”. I’m sorry it didn’t grow back before you got her. Please, regardless, tell her she looks and feels pretty every day.

She will follow you anywhere and everywhere. Even to the bathroom. Just make sure you sit up straight or she will be there to jump and perch on your shoulders and check out what’s going on.

Lastly, Whenever you go anywhere and leave her behind, please tell her good-bye and pet her head at least. She really responds well to “Bye Hazel, you be good.” Even though she has no intentions of being good, but seeing what she can get away with.

Please give her all the love we would and tell her that we miss her and we love her every day.

Please take care of my cat and treat her well,

Breanna

Hazel 4/1/2008-4/2/2022

Wednesday Works: What’s in a Name?

This is a game I’ve started playing with myself to get story ideas while I drive in the car. Using license plate letters, I come up with characters.

Urr is a caveman in the Neolithic times, one of the first to find fire.

Yeedle is a Jewish teen, growing up in the 1980’s during the AIDS pandemic and fearful for what love means in the future for him as a gay teen.

Mr. X is an internet hacker, like Robin Hood of old, hacking the banks in the 1990’s and covering his tracks with multiple other aliases.

Valez is a woman in 1830’s Texas fighting fiercely for her rights and her land despite the odds.

Ziya is a child model in the early 2000’s wishing to tell her parents she wants to quit modeling and be a normal child, but she knows her modeling is the only thing that pays the bills.

Wednesday Works: With This Kiss…

“With this kiss, I die!”

They were six, performing a dumbed down version of Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet for a room full of their parents. She was Juliet, and he in all of his front toothless glory was Romeo. They had practiced and practiced, but had never actually kissed in any of the practices. Mrs. Monroe has glossed over the fact when they had asked.

But now it was unavoidable.

“Miss Monroe,” Wally Siegelman called out off stage, breaking his character of Romeo and looking for the teacher. “Am I really supposed to kiss Rosie or can it be all pretend like?”

The audience of our parents broke out into a rumble of laughter. She laughed with them, even though Juliet was supposed to be in a death like sleep. Wally was and always would be a one of a kind.

He didn’t kiss her that performance or any of the others that followed. He just made it really convincing as he leaned forward just enough and blew a raspberry in her ear.

Every single night the audience laughed, and Shakespeare rolled in his grave.

Wednesday Works: Dear Writer’s Block

Dear Writer’s Block,

It’s not you, it’s me.

I’ve been so busy with everything that’s been going on, with long hours at work, too much homework on the weekends and a full social life that I haven’t been able to sit down and shoo you away with the keyboard.

Sure, you let me get a few words here and there so I can say I “write every day” but it’s never enough to leave me fulfilled and with a sense of accomplishment. It’s never enough to make me feel like I mean it when I say “I am a writer!”

Well, today that has to stop. I’ve spent too many days, weeks, months now trying to make something of the ideas in my head and then you step in and tell me to do anything but write.

You tell me: scroll Facebook (or any social media), it will make you feel great about your self esteem. Then I get distracted and don’t get words down.

You tell me: Play a few flash games for some inspiration, I’ll let you think about writing once you finish the level. And then I finish the level and don’t get words down.

You tell me: Don’t bother writing on your breaks and lunches from work, you’ll feel better about it when you get home. Then, when I get home, I don’t feel like writing, let alone doing anything else because I am so exhausted.

Writer’s Block, you keep making me these promises and then when I finally do sit down to write, to get words on the page and make a difference, you appear with the gentle whisper of “It’s not the right time.”

Respectfully, I thank you for protecting me during the times I wasn’t ready. I thank you for the times when I truly needed a distraction and needed your guidance enough to step away from a project. I thank you for the opportunities that arose when I couldn’t write.

But respectfully, we are done.

It’s time for me to write again and you’re not needed here.

-Bre

Wednesday Works: Caught Up in Research

Antique Firearms

The antique pistol let out a sad, soggy click, but would not fire. The main character looked down at the gun with a sigh.

“Not again!” She shouted in frustration. She smacked the butt of the gun with her soaking hands, hoping to dislodge some of the water. “Man, is the author going to be pissed.”

The villain dropped his aim. “Gun problems again, MC?”

“Yes!” She heaved a sigh. “Shouldn’t it be common sense that gunpowder doesn’t fire when it gets wet?”

The villain took a few water logged steps forward. “I’m sure I can help you with your soaking clothes instead.” He waggled his eyebrows.

The main character curled her face in disgust. “I’m sure we’re definitely not following the plot now, but—“

Space Swords

All around them the beach and the waves disappeared.

“What?” The main character asked, looking around as the scene disappeared. “Oh no! The author is messing with us again!” She looked down, instead of her pirate clothes, a space suit appeared instead. “I liked the pirate arc!”

The villain twirled his glowing light sword. “I dunno,” he said. “I’ve always been partial to space myself. Less rules to get caught up in. Like—“ He paused. “What happens when you fire a laser off into space, where does it stop and how many alien species could there be?” He laughed his evil laugh. “Much less rules to get caught in up here.”

The main character groaned. “But what about the principle of a pirate romance?”

The villain waggled his eyebrows again. “There can definitely be piracy in space. I would love to plunder your—“

“ENOUGH!” The main character shouted. “You and I aren’t supposed to be romantic until the last third of the book. Keep it to yourself for now until after the duel and when we can frustrate the writer the most.”

The villain winked then. “Yes, my Goody Two Shoes. I’ll be on my best worst behavior.”

Wednesday Works: The Call to Adventure

The letter arrived without pomp or circumstance. It was tucked between the water bill and the gas bill, barely even noticeable as he threw the mail on the counter after a long day at work.

“I’ll pay it when I get paid,” He grumbled, wiping the exhaustion of work from his face as he contemplated which frozen meal to throw in the microwave for dinner. He grumbled as he looked into the empty freezer. “Guess I’m not eating tonight.”

He sighed and pulled out his phone. How could he have let himself get so behind? Everyone else seemed so happy and stable where they were. Why did he have to suffer so much and hate every aspect of his life?

Why can’t I be successful as all my friends? Why can’t I go on adventures and “find myself”?

Three days later, he returned to the pile of bills, and found the letter with the fanciest handwriting he had ever seen on the front. For a moment, he simply stared. Could it really be addressed to him, or was it simply a mistake?

For one more moment, he held it in his hands. He weighed it, both opening it and ignoring it flashed through his head.

It was probably something dumb like a collections bill hidden as a handwritten invitation.

Eventually, his curiosity got the better of him. He opened it expecting the worst.

Instead, something much more cryptic.

“Treasure Awaits.”

Even more cryptic than that, underneath were coordinates.

Wednesday Works: The Seeker Of Words

The Seeker of Words spends her days trying to find the right word for the right situation. There are millions of words at her disposal, but sometimes the words hide and make her chase. Sometimes the words play hard to get and don’t come at the right time.

Most days, the Seeker of words prays to the muses and brings forth words that are close enough. She hopes the muses will bless her with the right words and bring them forth. The Seeker knows when she does find the words they will be great and powerful.

She searches and seeks them day and night.

Sometimes she might even get them right.

Wednesday Works: The Fate of the Telegraph Operator

When the telephone was invented, the telegraph operators found they were out of work. The whole process started slowly, a few telegraph operators at a time laid off over the first couple weeks. The majority of them all gone, the last few were the longest there.

And then, there was one.

His name was Gerald, and operating a telegraph was all he had ever known. His first instinct was to go to the boss, tell him there was some mistake. They couldn’t just let him go. He lived and breathed working the telegraph. It simply couldn’t be true that the telegraph was coming to an end.

His boss told him it was true.

“Go on, Gerald!” He said, in the middle of clearing out his office too. “You’re young, you’ll bounce back at the drop of a hat.” Gerald didn’t want to believe it. “Go on, take some time, see the world, experience the world that exists outside of the telegraph and find yourself.”

“I wouldn’t even know where to start, sir,” Gerald answered. “This job is all I’ve ever known. I’m not sure I would want to learn how to use those fancy telephonics.”

His boss understood. “There’s so much more to this world than working. And there will be more changes besides the telephone coming our way soon enough. Just go, just live and you’ll find your way.”

Gerald, the last telegraph operator, bought a train ticket and never looked back. He rode the train all the way out west, and back east again. He saw all the sights he could, picked up work when and where he needed it. He learned all he could and met as many people as he could. He experienced life, and then when it was finally time to settle down, he sat in front of a computer to tell his story.

Wednesday Works: The Snow Wife

The first day of winter was always the best. The weather getting colder, the first snow falls, the garish sun hiding away so she could be seen again. The first day of winter was the first day of his life for so many years and the last day of winter was the day he went back to his boring human life.

As a young man, he had felt the pull of a winter magic. She was the most beautiful woman he had ever met, and they had had a wonderful winter together, and then as the spring appeared, she told him the truth.

The magic was beautiful, but the magic couldn’t keep her alive past winter. The magic kept her young and beautiful and he promised to visit her year after year. Year after year, she stayed the same, but year after year, he grew older.

He had a feeling one of the years coming up would be his last. The winters were no longer as kind as they used to be. But he would still go back to her, as long as he was living.

Once the drifts of snow got deeper, he pulled himself from his cozy chair and his mountain of blankets, got dressed in his warmest coat and made the trek up toward the hill where they had first met.

With each step, his legs grew heavier, his breath shorter, coming out in puffs of steam. When he reached the top of the hill, exhaustion threatened, not too far off, but he built a snowman anyway. One with a coal smile and a cute little carrot nose. A snowman with gentle arms of sticks, with a pink scarf and the wide brimmed hat she had left behind.

When he was done, he sat down in the snow in a huff to catch his breath. Over the years, the magic had taken longer and longer to work.

Just as he was about to give up and go back home, the thought he was too old for magic swimming in his old head, she appeared.

The snow woman was just as beautiful as he had always remembered. Her dark hair cascading down her shoulders, the wide brimmed hat framing her face as if it were artwork, her eyes warm and bright, even on the coldest day of the year.

“I fear I don’t have much time left,” He said, his words forced out through puffs of air, still trying to catch his breath. “This may be the last winter we have together, my love.”

She simply smiled and sat next to him. As she took his hand in hers, it felt real and solid. “I know,” She said gently. Her smile used to be enough to ease all the pain in the world, but it did little now. “Just lay yourself down and fall asleep in my lap like you used to.” She smoothed his hair gently. “Like that first time, and when you wake up, everything will be new again.”

“Just like the first time,” He said, easing his head onto her lap and looking up at the flurry of snowflakes dancing down upon the earth.

He wished he had brought her a warmer jacket all those years ago.

Wednesday Works: Returning The Past

Moving out of his current apartment and into a new house meant a lot of decluttering. The space he had lived in was small, but somehow over the years he had lived there, he had managed to collect a lot of junk. He found that particular item in his bookshelf, tucked between two massive textbooks he hadn’t used since his college days nearly a decade earlier.

On the outside, it was simply a book, the cover warn, but well loved, the sticker from the library blatantly obvious on the bottom of the spine. Yet another library book he had failed to return on time. He sighed and tossed it onto the couch, along with the other books he didn’t intend to keep.

As he did, a photograph fell out, withered with age, the subject in it a young woman in sepia, her dark lips in a large smile, her eyes bright. An artifact for sure, since the car she stood next to would be considered a classic in the current day and age.

For a moment, the photograph captivated him. What was it doing in the middle of a library book and how had he missed it before?

On the back, in faded pencil, written in a fancy script was just two words and a year.

My Love, 1942

From the words, written in a gentle hand, he knew someone was missing it. He made it his goal to find them, whoever it was.

17 years later

He straightened his tie as he looked up and the old aged building nearly crumbled by time on a side street of New York City.

After an exhaustive search, over nearly two decades, he had finally found her. The mystery was finally solved. He just had to knock on the door and meet her.

He took a deep breath and walked up the crumbling steps toward the door in need of a fresh coat of paint.

When he knocked on the door, a woman younger than he expected opened it. Much too young to be the girl in the photograph, but bearing a striking familiarity to her.

After years and years and an exhaustive search, he had finally figured out the woman’s name and tried to track her down through the years of history she had to have lived.

“I’m looking for Hilde,” He said, choosing to be brave and keep on the search for the answers he craved.

The younger woman’s face fell. “Oh,” She said. “So you don’t know.” She took a deep breath and her face tightened into a mask of no emotion. “She died last week.” She took another deep breath. “She and my grandfather both, which is kind of romantic, you know?”

“Oh,” He said, mirroring her tone. “Well, I found an old photograph of her, but perhaps you would like to have it instead.” He passed the old photograph her way.

The moment she saw it, her face lit up. “Gramma Hilde always did love her cars, it’s no wonder she would send it to Grandad when he enlisted.” She looked at the back. “His Loves, how fitting.”

For a moment, she seemed to forget he was there. “Would you like to come in for some coffee?” She asked when she finally did look at him. “I’m sure Gramma Hilde has a picture in front of every car she’s ever owned, but this one I haven’t seen.”

“I’d like that very much.”

Wednesday Works: If It Doesn’t Fit…

In her world, everything and everyone had a place. Each and every person, place or thing fit together like puzzle pieces.

As she built her world exactly the way she wanted it, placing the people carefully in the city and the forests, building dark creatures between the trees and damsels in distress in the high castle towers, there was one person that refused to fit in.

No matter how much she moved around the king and his consorts, or the priest and friar in the abbey, the dashing hero wouldn’t fit. The princess had loved him, sung his praises, but he simply would not fit.

For weeks and weeks, she fought the issue, searching for a place for her dashing hero. Then, in a fit of inspiration at 3AM from a dead sleep, the solution came.

“I have to kill him.”

Finally, her book had an ending she was happy with.

Wednesday Works: Love of Language

His skin simulator felt too tight. It trapped him inside, too tight in some places, too large in others, heavy with use and age, but he would give anything to be there, waiting to learn their language. He had heard all about it, tried to learn on his own planet, but something was missing. There were so many applications that books and simulators could not teach him.

Definitely against the rules, and he most likely would face consequences when he returned. If the officials of his planet ever found him out, being among the less advanced lifeforms on Earth, the torture would be great. But he would risk it all, the uncomfortable skin simulator, the torture if he was found out, to learn their beautiful language.

“Tell me,” He said, trying the voice on for size. “What is the meaning of ‘Bless Your Little Heart’?”

Wednesday Works: Through the Balustrades

Music and laughter flowed up from the open double doors on the gentle breeze flowing through the curtains. Josephine looked up from her studies, longing to join them, but her governess forced her back to the page.

“Your handwriting is atrocious, child!” Her governess, Prudence admonished. “How do you expect your kingdom to enact your orders as the future Queen if they can’t read them?”

“Can’t I go out and enjoy what’s left of the sunshine?” Josephine asked instead. “I’ll study my handwriting hard all night by candlelight if you just let me go play!”

“No,” Her Governess snapped. “You are to sit here until it is legible.”

The routine was the same every afternoon during her studies. During the spring and summers, it was unbearable to hear the people in the courtyard as she practiced her letters. Prudence never let her outside during the times of the festivals and frivolities.

One afternoon something hard smacked into the window and shook the glass. Josephine jumped, her quill sliding across the paper and ruining her studies. Prudence would not be pleased, but she was away for the moment. After a quick glance, she rushed toward the open window to see what all the excitement was about.

Outside, on the balcony, rolling gently across the ground, a rubber ball abandoned. She ran after it and picked it up, as forbidden of an object as it was for the future queen.

In her arms, still warm from the sunlight, it was a forbidden treasure. She would have to deflate it to hide it, a secret treasure from the forbidden outside world. So rare anything ever came over the balcony from the outside unharmed.

The last had been a small bird, and it hadn’t ended well. The bird had snapped its neck on impact. It wasn’t the first bird either.

“Hey!” A voice shouted from below.

Curiosity got the better of her. She looked over the tall balustrades. A young bot, not much older than her, not too clean, soot and dirt across his cheeks, but his skin was sun warmed and bright, his smile wide as he looked up at her.

“Can you toss the ball down?” He asked.

She tossed it down without thinking and ran, cursing herself for not staying, but fearing the wrath of her Governess. As she hurried back to the desk, she was sure she heard a muffled thank you on the breeze.

The next week, something smacked into the window and made the glass shake again.

“Good lord!” Prudence shrieked, jumping from the table. “Is that another bird?” Birds were quite common, none of them survived.

The Governess moved toward the window and found the same ball.

Josephine stayed at the desk, but looking up over her quill toward the window.

“Hey!” The same boy’s voice flowed up from the courtyard. “Can the pretty young lady come down and play?”

She had never heard Prudence so furious. “No!” She shrieked. “The pretty young lady has more important duties, you impetuous rascal!” The ball landed down in the courtyard with a violent whine, slammed into the cement walkway.

The doors were slammed and locked.

“Just wait until your father hears about this!” Prudence threatened.

For the rest of the afternoon, Josephine didn’t lift her nose from the page.

That evening, Prudence dragged her before her father and made her explain. Josephine expected the worst, but her father broke out into an understanding smile.

“A boy in the courtyard?”

“Yes, father, but he didn’t mean any harm.”

Prudence made it all seem like it was the end of the world, but her father seemed to enjoy the whole thing.

“Would you have joined him, if given the chance?”

Josephine smiled, the fear ebbing away. Her father had always been more understanding than her harsh Governess. “I would have loved nothing more.”

Her father’s smile turned mischievous. “Send him a correspondence,” He said. “Prudence,” He said, turning toward the Governess. “Find where this young man spends his time and make sure he gets the correspondence from my daughter.”

The Governess wasn’t pleased, but in the end it all worked out.

Several Years Later

“You’re messing it up!” A young man whispered loudly to his comrades as they directed a balloon up through the balustrades of the palace.

Josephine turned toward the noise, looking up from her first official proclamation to the kingdom, legible and proper. She smiled as she turned toward the shadow of a bouncing balloon on a string through the curtains.

She stepped out of the study and caught it between her hands, slightly warmed from the sun.

“Excuse me!” She called down, looking over the balustrades at the back of their heads. The young man, the leader, the same boy as all those years before, looked up at her and smiled. “Is this yours?”

His smile only got wider as he gazed upon her. “Only if you want to come out and play with me.” An inside joke between them from all the years. “I’ll ditch these knuckleheads, and we’ll go down to the river.” His gaze flicked to the balloon on the string. “But only if you wear that ring there.”

There, floating on the string, tied loosely, was a gentle silver ring. It wasn’t as dazzling as one should have been for a queen, but it was perfect since it was from him.

“You impetuous rascal!” She admonished him.

His smile only grew wider. “My name is Wallace.” He winked. “And don’t you forget it!”

Wednesday Works: The Brewing Discontent

While he was breaking into the castle vaults, looking for any information to get the tyrant king off the throne, his wife was having tea with the very same man. He wasn’t aware of if until he came home that evening and found her sitting at their small kitchen table, tending to their meager chipped tea set.

“Come,” she said, beckoning him toward the table, perfectly set out as though they were royals themselves, though several pieces of the aged tea set were missing or long broken. “I must tell you about my afternoon.”

Money had been scarce in the kingdom, everything had been scarce in the kingdom since the tyrant child of a man had taken over from his kind father, gone too soon. Tea was a rarity, especially in their house over the past few months.

He sat, hoping tea meant good news. They had been trying for a child, both of them on the brink of the wrong side of time to bring a child into the world, the world itself a chaotic mess to bring a child into. Deep down, he still hoped.

Deep down, he hoped he would be the one to turn the tide and usher in a new era with a better king upon the throne. In his own misfortune, the search of the castle vaults had come up empty, but the shame burned too deep to tell his own wife of his failures.

The less she knew, the better.

The tea cup before him was empty, small dings and chips along the lip and permanent stains from years of use. The same tea set he had inherited from his parents, mixed in with what she had brought from what had been left of her family home nearly two decades earlier. The table was empty, save for their chipped tea set. The tea not quite ready to serve, but the kettle humming gently on the stove.

“I had tea with the king today,” she said, looking right at him, quite proud of herself. It was not the accomplishment he was expecting, but it peaked his interest.

The castle guard didn’t let just anyone in. He wondered how she had managed it, and what had come from it. There were more questions than answers then, but he simply waited and listened.

When she didn’t continue right away, he asked his first question. “Well,” he said, the anticipation burning him. “How did it go?”

She gave him a smug smile. “I didn’t care much for him nor his policies, but he certainly does enjoy his tea.” She lifted a half empty vial from under the table, somewhere under her skirts, the sickly neon yellow liquid catching just enough of the light. “It made it quite easy to hide a few drops of Mama’s poison into each cup when he was distracted with—“ she gave him a smug look, easy enough to read into. “—Other things.”

The joy and the curse of feminine wiles.

If the king couldn’t be shown to the people as a fraud, poison was the next best thing, he supposed. He had never been so proud of her, so enamored with her skills. So ready to take her to bed and—

The kettle whistled as she stood from the table to tend to it. He watched as she lifted the lid of the tea pot, cracked and jagged and poured the boiling steaming water in. Tea had never been so exciting as he waited for the rest of her tale of her afternoon with the king.

They sat for a moment in silence, waiting for the tea to fully brew. He watched her, and the subtleness of her. She had grown into her age, worn it like a badge of honor, even though she had always been wise beyond her years. She used to do slight of hand tricks before she had been married and resigned to knitting and creating for a child that would never come. Or at least not yet.

They still had time, he realized. The fact that she had made it to the king first while he had found nothing was nothing more than a shove forward into the inevitable. He wanted to bed her for being so smart, so resourceful.

“What happened next?” He asked. A kind of foreplay before the foreplay, an excitement that was purely mental and nothing else, for the time being.

A satisfied smile crossed her lips. Then she put her finger to them. “I’m not sure I should tell you all that happened while I was there. A lady has to keep some secrets to herself.”

He could accept that, especially since she had done in a few hours what he and his rebellion had failed to do in years. She had actually seen the man who most claimed didn’t exist at all, or was merely a figurehead.

“What’s to happen now?” He asked instead.

She stood and moved toward him with a sway of her hips. She reached past him, brushing against him in a way that set his nerves alive and took hold of the teapot. She poured the tea into his cup, slow and steady, the stream of gold in the light and smelling more heavenly than the chipped China portrayed. Next, she dropped in two sugar cubes, chipped too, with a plink, plop and added just a drop of cream.

“Drink up, dear,” she said, rubbing her hand across his shoulder, seductive and slow. “There’s so much more to my afternoon than you’ll know.”

He took the first sip. An absolute delight of flavors and aromas danced on his tongue as he watched her move back across the table.

She sat back down in her chair, but didn’t pour herself a cup. She simply watched him enjoy his, and enjoy it he did. He thought to ask why she hadn’t joined him.

A clink of glass against the table. The same vial as before, only dregs of the sickly yellow liquid remaining, sliding down the side, thick and syrupy.

“Why?” He asked next, the effects of the poison kicking in quicker than he realized. “Why must you kill me too?” His arms and hands were numb, his skin on fire, his vision blurred.

She just laughed as he slumped from the chair, his muscles feeling like jelly.

“I never said I killed him.” She brushed her fingers across his cheek, wiping away blood tears from his face. “He simply offered me a better deal, a better life, if I turned on you.”

Then, she blew out the candles, turned out the lanterns. Then, she left him alone in agony.

Wednesday Works: The Keeper of Words

The library might as well have been her second home. As much time as she had spent there, she was surprised they even asked to see her library card anymore. She had never even had a late fee, had never forgotten a good book. She had practically spent her whole life reading.

Ever since she could remember, her mother had brought her along into the library and it had become her refuge. Through anything and everything. Through school, and long long after.

She had made her way through several sections already, too many novels to count, and topics ranging from animal husbandry to x ray technology and far beyond. Her new obsession over the last few weeks were the stars, the origins of their names and their meaning.

She was nearly through an encyclopedia of the constellations when she began to smell smoke. At first, she thought nothing of it, the heater was old and had always been old, made the whole library smell like burnt ash for the first few weeks it was on and even through the winter months a whiff here or there would linger.

The year had just rolled over into the cold months, so it was no surprise, but somehow it was different. This smoke smelled different, felt different, much warmer than simply the heater. When it began to become difficult to read, she knew something was wrong.

She remembered what she had read about fire safety years ago and ducked low crawling toward the exit, but it was getting harder and harder to see the further she went. She couldn’t be sure if she was in the non fiction or the fiction section or the R’s or the C’s. It was all way too confusing in the dark smoke. She looked up to try and find where she was and where the nearest exit was, but the smoke was too thick, too black. But then, it began to change before her eyes.

She stared at bit too long and rubbed her eyes. Were those words?

THIS WAY —->

It had to be too much smoke inhalation. Buildings couldn’t talk, couldn’t direct people out when they were in a panic. She had to be hallucinating. But she didn’t have any other options. She went the way the words requested.

<——THIS WAY

Through several twists and turns, and directions within the smoke, she found her way out in the nick of time. As she burst through the double doors to safety. As she took her first clear deep breath in a while, she was sure she saw words in the last burst of smoke.

TELL OTHERS OF OUR STORIES, KEEPER OF WORDS.

Wednesday Works: We, The People

Here, on the eve of a new decision, we the people have done as we were asked to do. We put our best selves forward and made a decision for the future. Left or right, red or blue, it doesn’t matter.

We the people used our voices and stood up and made sure we were heard. Whatever happens, we the people have won.

We, as a people and as the people of this great nation, should not be separated. Red or blue, religious or not, male or female, as a people, we need to stand together.

We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect Union.

Not the perfect union, but a more perfect union. We, the people are not perfect, but we should be moving toward doing our best to be more perfect in our union and try to be better as a people.

As we wait for the results, of our voices that we shared toward what we thought was right, let’s congratulate ourselves.

We did what we could, and whatever happens we are still the people of the United States and we will continue to be so.

Remember we are one people, not two sides.

Wednesday Works: The Morning After

The morning after she wakes up with a headache. Throbbing in the center of her forehead making the lights too bright, sounds too harsh, everything too painful. The night before was a dream, but the morning after is a nightmare of blurs and raucous noises that burn her brain from the inside out.

The night before, a masquerade took place where the most eligible bachelor in all of New England had begun looking for a wife. She had only intended to stay for a few hours, masquerades and rich pretty boys weren’t exactly her scene.

It wasn’t like the so called Prince of the East Coast would be interested in an artist who could barely rub two pennies together. He had more money than he knew what to do with, and she was lucky to pay her bills on time and in full.

Her friend had secured the invitation and brought her along, to enjoy a night on the rich folks dime, if nothing else.

Something else had definitely happened. By pure chance, the prince himself, or a very clever look-alike, had asked her to dance. It had started as one dance, but that bled into many dances and so many more drinks, until she couldn’t remember how she got back to her apartment.

The rest of the night had become a blur, until she woke up with the pounding headache and a mouth as parched as the Sahara.

Her first thought: The biggest glass of water in her kitchen, and—

“Coffeeee,” A voice mumbles next to her, a rustling under the thick fluffy comforter.

She hadn’t remembered going to bed with anyone, considering she lived in a one bedroom apartment, alone. She pulls the comforter away to reveal—

“The Prince of the East Coast!” She shrieks. All logical thought leaves her.

“Hello,” He says, with a smile that was much more intimate than any of the other versions of him plastered all over the tabloids. “I’m Anthony.”